Persona
Who is this page actually written for?
Who is this page actually written for?
Addresses her concern: possible without technical skill
When the persona changes, the first line of copy should change: who it is written for decides what to say and how.
Who the copy speaks to: The persona gives a concrete age, job, and concerns, so copy can use language she knows instead of speaking vaguely.
Which features come first: Her goal sets priority: showing client work first, or building an admin panel first.
Acceptance has a basis: How would she read this paragraph becomes a concrete discussion instead of a gut call.
This page's target user is a 35-year-old freelance designer who wants clients but cannot code. Rewrite the homepage copy for her: state what she gets first, use language she knows, and avoid piling on technical terms. Afterward, tell me which concern each paragraph addresses.